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This path...

This path I take,

where will it lead?

To happiness,

trust,

love,

freedom from this darkness?

Or,

will it lead me to disaster,

dismay,

lies,

hate,

to just keep me in here,

this shadow?

On this path,

I must choose,

is this right?

Wrong?

Am i trying to hard?

Not enough?

Full of questions,

no answers..

If I may choose the wrong choice,

its over,

shall i never reach this freedom?

i dont even know if this exists,

this "happiness",

this "trust",

this..."love".

What does it mean?

How does it feel?

Will I be able to do this?

I dont know..

It can lead me to heaven,

or hell..

This path...

The fork in the road..

It is not my choice anymore...

Shall God pick my destiny...

Wether I stay in darkness,

or reach light.

On

This Path...
:icondgirl1224:
iLAME POEM ALERT!

Jeez, i should never write again xD

And yes, there will be more crappy poems *DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN* :o!!

So anyways, yeah, its cheesy, and dumb, but I look at life like a path, and once you reach the fork in the road, its Gods choice where you go, to heaven or hell. So yeah, make good choices in this path :nod:.

I blame ~LadyxBloodyxInk for getting me into poetry...and french...

LE GATEAU EST UN MENSONGE!!

Lol, I suck xD;;
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:icondraga13:
~Draga13 Mar 31, 2008   Traditional Artist
Wow, you really need some self esteme help dont you... YOU DO NOT SUCK!!!

And I like yr poem, if nothing else its a thought povoker!
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:icondgirl1224:
Thanks...but its pretty bad...someone pointed out it has to many lines and is too short and i dont have the grasp on poetry ;__;

I though poetry is what the author feel on the inside ): ...

..right?

:raincloud:
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:icondraga13:
~Draga13 Apr 1, 2008   Traditional Artist
Thats ok, I dont have poetry power either...

Yesh, thats what they is supposed to be, but they can also make you think alitle!

:hug: <---Cuz you needed one!
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:icondgirl1224:
Well, i guess poetry is dumb anyway :paranoid:

:hug: thanks for the cheer-up!
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:icondraga13:
~Draga13 Apr 2, 2008   Traditional Artist
:lmao:

Yr welcome! =P

Yay! Im on yr signi!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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:icondgirl1224:
LOOL you JUST noticed? its been there for a while xD;;
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:icondraga13:
~Draga13 Apr 3, 2008   Traditional Artist
I hadent looked untill JUST then, but its cool anyways! (I tryed to put u and some other people on, but it didnt work...>.<
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:icondgirl1224:
L to the O to the L xD;;

well, you DO know how to, right? (SHALL I BECOME A TEACHER AGAINNN?)
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